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Good morning Edleth.

I will go to the kindergarten of my daughter this Friday so, I can't study with you.
And I will start swimming next week from Monday to Friday.
End of time at AM10:50, so I changed my English class time.
please understand.
In class time, I'm still a little nervous.
I want to speak well with you.
But I think my level is below 3 years old. :(
But you said "Don't rush" I will try to more than now.
You are very friendly to me. :)
Thank you. See you next in class.
Have a good day.

I will go to the kindergarten of my daughter this Friday so, I can't study with you.
And I will start swimming next week from Monday to Friday.
End of time at AM10:50, so I changed my English class time.
please understand.
In class time, I'm still a little nervous.
I want to speak well with you.
But I think my level is below 3 years old. :(
But you said "Don't rush" I will try to more than now.
You are very friendly to me. :)
Thank you. See you next in class.
Have a good day.

 

Corrected Message:
I will go to my daughter's kindergarten this Friday, so I can't study with you on that day. Also, I will start swimming next week from Monday to Friday. My swimming class ends at 10:50 a.m., so I changed my English class time. I hope you understand.
During class, I'm still a little nervous. I want to speak well with you, but I feel like my level is like a 3-year-old’s. :(
But you told me, "Don't rush," so I will try harder than before.
You are very friendly to me. :)
Thank you. See you in the next class!
Have a good day!


Reply to Her Message:
Thank you so much for your message! I completely understand, and it's no problem at all. I hope you enjoy your time at your daughter’s kindergarten and have a great start with your swimming classes! Don’t worry about your English level, you’re doing much better than you think. Just like I said, don’t rush. You’re improving little by little, and I’m happy to help you every step of the way. See you next class! :)

 


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