I usually do exercise. I didn't like exercise from day one. I didn't body shape that gain weight easily. But after having a baby, from then I have had pained body and gained weight. After doing chores or walking, my joints felt sore. Also swollen joints made me felt hurt. So I had been treatment for joints. from back then I've beening workout almost everyday.it seemed to build muscle can ease my pain. I felt like I am back to life. My body conditions are best now and that that give me energy
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Original: I usually do exercise.
Corrected: I usually exercise.
Explanation: "Do exercise" is not incorrect, but "exercise" as a verb is more natural and concise. -
Original: I didn't like exercise from day one.
Corrected: I didn’t like exercising from the beginning.
Explanation: "Exercising" is more natural after "like." "From day one" is fine but "from the beginning" is smoother here. -
Original: I didn't body shape that gain weight easily.
Corrected: I didn’t have a body type that gains weight easily.
Explanation: The sentence was missing a subject and verb ("have a body type") and had incorrect verb tense ("gain" → "gains"). -
Original: But after having a baby, from then I have had pained body and gained weight.
Corrected: But after having a baby, I started experiencing body pain and gained weight.
Explanation: "Pained body" is awkward. "Started experiencing body pain" is more natural. "From then" is redundant and was removed. -
Original: After doing chores or walking, my joints felt sore.
✅ Correct as is (very minor revision optional): After doing chores or going for a walk, my joints felt sore. -
Original: Also swollen joints made me felt hurt.
Corrected: Also, swollen joints made me feel pain.
Explanation: "Made me felt" is incorrect. It should be "made me feel." "Feel pain" is more appropriate than "felt hurt" in this context. -
Original: So I had been treatment for joints.
Corrected: So I received treatment for my joints.
Explanation: "Had been treatment" is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is "received treatment." -
Original: from back then I've beening workout almost everyday.
Corrected: Since then, I’ve been working out almost every day.
Explanation: "From back then" should be "Since then." "Beening workout" is incorrect; correct form is "been working out." "Everyday" (adj.) should be "every day" (adv.). -
Original: it seemed to build muscle can ease my pain.
Corrected: It seems that building muscle can ease my pain.
Explanation: The sentence needed clearer structure. "Building muscle" is the subject of "can ease." -
Original: I felt like I am back to life.
Corrected: I felt like I came back to life.
Explanation: "Felt" should be followed by "came" to match the past tense. "Back to life" is fine and expressive. -
Original: My body conditions are best now and that that give me energy.
Corrected: My body is in the best condition now, and that gives me energy.
Explanation: "Body conditions" should be singular: "body is in the best condition." "That that" is likely a typo. "Gives" agrees with "that."
Final Edited Text:
I usually exercise. I didn’t like exercising from the beginning. I didn’t have a body type that gains weight easily. But after having a baby, I started experiencing body pain and gained weight. After doing chores or going for a walk, my joints felt sore. Also, swollen joints made me feel pain. So I received treatment for my joints. Since then, I’ve been working out almost every day. It seems that building muscle can ease my pain. I felt like I came back to life. My body is in the best condition now, and that gives me energy.
