Today is rainy Day

Today is raniy day. I like raniy day. Because raniy is cool and fancy.
I do jump in puddle, My feel is fun and enjoy the puddle.
I like jump in puddle and cool rainy day!

Today is raniy day. = Today is a rainy day. 

I like raniy day. Because raniy is cool and fancy. = I like rainy days because it is cool and refreshing. 

I do jump in puddle, = I jump in puddles. 

My feel is fun and enjoy the puddle. = It is fun and enjoyable. 

I like jump in puddle and cool rainy day! = I like jumping in puddles and cool rainy days! 

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Hi Ella! 

Good job in making your first composition! It was nice to read about how you enjoy rainy days! :) 

Be careful of your spelling, and sentence construction. Keep writing regularly so you can get better at written grammar and using various English words.

You can do it! 

-teacher Mischa :)