It was my grandma's birthday. We got together and celbrate with cake.She still likes fit in gorgeous outfit and get some ai and having a delicious food. We went to sa-bu restaurant has salad bar like a buffet. After getting married I haven't met her more than before. During the holiday, I have to follow to memorial service in a law. She felt a bummer. But she said it is Korean culture that having with women.I was happy. It's a been a while we got together.I hope we often meet during she alive
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1. Original:
It was my grandma's birthday.
Corrected:
✅ It was my grandma’s birthday.
Explanation: This sentence is already correct.
2. Original:
We got together and celbrate with cake.
Corrected:
✅ We got together and celebrated with cake.
Explanation: "Celbrate" is a spelling error → "celebrated" (past tense needed to match "got together").
3. Original:
She still likes fit in gorgeous outfit and get some ai and having a delicious food.
Corrected:
✅ She still likes to fit into gorgeous outfits, get some air, and enjoy delicious food.
Explanation:
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"likes fit" → should be "likes to fit" (verb pattern).
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"in gorgeous outfit" → "into gorgeous outfits" (plural and proper preposition).
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"get some ai" → likely meant "get some air."
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"having a delicious food" → correct form is "enjoy delicious food" or "have delicious food" (no need for "a" with uncountable "food").
4. Original:
We went to sa-bu restaurant has salad bar like a buffet.
Corrected:
✅ We went to Sabu, a restaurant that has a salad bar like a buffet.
Explanation:
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"sa-bu" → corrected to "Sabu" (capitalization and formatting).
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Combine properly: "a restaurant that has..." adds clarity and correct grammar.
5. Original:
After getting married I haven't met her more than before.
Corrected:
✅ Since getting married, I haven't seen her as often as before.
Explanation:
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"met" → "seen" is more natural here.
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"more than before" → should be "as often as before" for proper comparison.
6. Original:
During the holiday, I have to follow to memorial service in a law.
Corrected:
✅ During the holidays, I have to attend the memorial service with my in-laws.
Explanation:
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"follow to" → incorrect. The correct verb is "attend."
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"in a law" → should be "in-laws" (family-related term).
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"holiday" → usually "holidays" in this context (plural for general times like Chuseok, Seollal, etc.).
7. Original:
She felt a bummer.
Corrected:
✅ She felt disappointed.
Explanation:
"Felt a bummer" is not natural English. "A bummer" is a casual noun. Better to say "felt disappointed."
8. Original:
But she said it is Korean culture that having with women.
Corrected:
✅ But she said it’s part of Korean culture for women to participate.
Explanation:
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“having with women” → unclear and ungrammatical.
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Rewritten for clarity and correct structure.
9. Original:
I was happy.
Corrected:
✅ I was happy.
Explanation: This is already fine.
10. Original:
It's a been a while we got together.
Corrected:
✅ It’s been a while since we got together.
Explanation:
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"a been" → incorrect, should be "been."
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Need "since" to connect the time expression correctly.
11. Original:
I hope we often meet during she alive.
Corrected:
✅ I hope we can meet often while she’s still alive.
Explanation:
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"during she alive" → incorrect. Use "while she’s still alive" for proper grammar and clarity.
Final Edited Text:
It was my grandma’s birthday. We got together and celebrated with cake. She still likes to fit into gorgeous outfits, get some air, and enjoy delicious food. We went to Sabu, a restaurant that has a salad bar like a buffet. Since getting married, I haven’t seen her as often as before. During the holidays, I have to attend the memorial service with my in-laws. She felt disappointed, but she said it’s part of Korean culture for women to participate. I was happy. It’s been a while since we got together. I hope we can meet often while she’s still alive.
