My mom sent it from hometown.
Mom lives near the sea.
I was born in village near the sea and I lived for 20 years.
I have lived in seoul for 35 years now.
She often sends fresh seafood.
It is expensive in seoul.
She said that I need to gain weight by eating a lot.
She is always worried about my health.
But I am very,very healthy.
I am more worried about my mom health.
Mom, I love you!
The delivery box full of the seafood has arrived.✅
My mom sent it from hometown. = My mom sent it from my hometown.
Mom lives near the sea. ✅
I was born in village near the sea and I lived for 20 years. = I was born in a village near the sea and I lived there for 20 years.
I have lived in seoul for 35 years now. = I have lived in Seoul for 35 years now.
She often sends fresh seafood. ✅
It is expensive in seoul. = It is expensive in Seoul.
She said that I need to gain weight by eating a lot. ✅
She is always worried about my health. ✅
But I am very,very healthy. ✅
I am more worried about my mom health. = I am more worried about my mom's health.
Mom, I love you! ✅
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Hi Challina! You did well in making sentences. There were some errors so let me give some reminders. Make sure to add pronouns and articles. Capitalize proper nouns like Seoul. Also, use the possessive form ('s) for mom's health. Your mom is very sweet for sending those seafood to you. Enjoy and may both of you always be in good health! :)
