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Dear. Edleth

Good afternoon!
I caught a cold, so I think I can't study this week.
My feel not bad but voice crack is too much.

And..
Can I ask a favor?
As you know, my English level isn't high.
I need a lot of time to anwser your questions.
Suddenly I didn't think even simple words to anwser.
Please understand.

I'm gald to study with you.
See you in the next class.
Have a good day. :)

Good afternoon!
I caught a cold, so I think I can't study this week.
My feel not bad but voice crack is too much.

And..
Can I ask a favor?
As you know, my English level isn't high.
I need a lot of time to anwser your questions.
Suddenly I didn't think even simple words to anwser.
Please understand.

I'm gald to study with you.
See you in the next class.
Have a good day. :)

____________________________

 

Revised Version:

Good afternoon!
I caught a cold, so I think I won’t be able to study this week. I don’t feel too bad, but my voice is really hoarse.

Also, can I ask a favor?
As you know, my English level isn’t very high, and it takes me a lot of time to answer your questions. Sometimes, I can’t even think of simple words to respond. Please understand.

I’m glad to be studying with you.
See you in the next class. Have a good day! :)


Corrections Made:

  1. "I think I can't study" → "I think I won’t be able to study" (more natural phrasing).

  2. "My feel not bad" → "I don’t feel too bad" (corrected grammar and improved phrasing).

  3. "voice crack is too much" → "my voice is really hoarse" (corrected and clarified).

  4. "Can I ask a favor?" → "Also, can I ask a favor?" (added transition for flow).

  5. "anwser" → "answer" (spelling correction).

  6. "Suddenly I didn't think even simple words to anwser." → "Sometimes, I can’t even think of simple words to respond." (clarified meaning and improved phrasing).

  7. "I'm gald" → "I’m glad" (spelling correction).

________________________________

Good afternoon!

I’m sorry to hear that you caught a cold, and I hope you feel better soon. Don’t worry about studying too much this week; your health comes first. Take care of yourself and rest.I completely understand that English can be challenging, and I’m really proud of your efforts! Take your time with the answers, and don’t feel rushed. We’re all here to support you. Looking forward to studying with you again soon! Take care and see you in the next class. Have a wonderful day! 

 


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