I think students must have free school lunches because there could be some unfairness and problems that connected to economy and business.First there could be unfairness because some families can not afford it and that is vey unfair to students that can not eat lunches because they can’t afford it. Also, actually school is for students education it’s not personal business so there actually no reasons that schools need offer to pay. From these reasons I think we should have free lunches.
Revised Argument:
I believe students should have free school lunches because it would prevent unfairness and address issues related to the economy and business.
First, there could be unfairness because some families cannot afford lunch, which makes it unfair to students who go without because of financial difficulties.
Additionally, schools are meant for education, not for personal business. There’s no reason why students should have to pay for lunch at school.
For these reasons, I think we should have free lunches for all students.
Corrections Made:
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"must" → "should" (more appropriate for suggestion).
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"there could be unfairness" → "it would prevent unfairness" (clarification).
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"some families can not afford it" → "some families cannot afford lunch" (clarification and grammar).
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"that is vey unfair" → "which makes it unfair" (grammar and clarity).
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"school is for students education" → "schools are meant for education" (grammar correction).
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"it’s not personal business so there actually no reasons that schools need offer to pay" → "not for personal business. There’s no reason why students should have to pay for lunch" (simplified and clarified).
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Reorganized and streamlined the conclusion.
