happyest day

I went to the waterpark with my family that day. I wanted a long time for this day.
When I enterd the waterpark,i was suprised. because the water is very big and had lots of people. the only thing i hated was that there were so many people. the most thing that i liked is the lazy river. i played 'catch' with my dad and sister.
when we were done with the waterpark, i wanted to play more next, we went to the them park named 'everland'.
We took alot of picturs and We had many rides . and we got to see the photo festival. there were flashing lights and stachus.
i will always remember that day.

Happiest Day

I went to the water park with my family that day. I had been looking forward for this day for a long time. When I entered the waterpark, I was surprised because the water was very large and there were lots of people. The only thing I hated was that there were so many people. The thing I liked the most was the lazy river. I played 'catch' with my dad and sister.

When we were done with the water park, I wanted to play more. Next we went to the theme park named 'Everland'. We took a lot of pictures and went on many rides. We also got to see the photo festival, which had flashing lights and statues.

I will always remember that day.

 

 

NOTE: Please check the title Jin. It should be 'happiest' not happyest.