My little brother’s show

I go to my brother’s talent show today.
there is 72 family and we pick a number to decide when we will go in.
We pick a 53, so we came 53th family. At first show I think that my brother’s anxious.
Because his expression is not good. But after first show my brother do very well.
My brother did ‘Roly Poly’, ‘Peter Pan’ etc.
And other brothers did lot of other performance too.
We watch show 2 hours and get out. I meet my brother outside.
I present the bouquet with 2 kinder joy.
It is splendid they with family and I am proud of my brother.

My Little Brother’s Show

I go to my brother’s talent show today.
There are seventy-two (72) families, and we pick a number to decide when we will go in.
We picked fifty-three (53), so we came 53rd as a family. At the first show, I think that my brother’s anxious.
Because his expression is not good. But after the first show, my brother did very well.
My brother did ‘Roly Poly,’ ‘Peter Pan,’ etc.
And other brothers did a lot of other performances too.
We watch the show for two (2) hours and get out. I meet my brother outside.
I present the bouquet with two (2) Kinder Joy.
It is splendid for them with family, and I am proud of my brother.