Food stretches the stomach walls, triggering nerves that send signals to the brain. Hormones also play a role in making us feel hunger and fullness, allowing us to decide whether to eat more. I find it very interesting that our body’s structure helps us recognize when we are full and prevents us from overeating. I would love to learn more about other bodily functions that protect us.
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stomach's walls" → "stomach walls"
- The possessive form is unnecessary here. "Stomach walls" is a more natural way to phrase it.
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"And hormones make us feel hunger and fullness." → "Hormones also play a role in making us feel hunger and fullness."
- Removed "And" to improve flow.
- Reworded for clarity and smoother transition.
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"Therefore we can select if we eat more." → "allowing us to decide whether to eat more."
- "Select" is not the correct word choice in this context.
- "Decide whether to" sounds more natural.
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"I thought body structure can help us to notice if we are full and to prevent us eat more is very intersting." → "I find it very interesting that our body’s structure helps us recognize when we are full and prevents us from overeating."
- Changed "I thought" to "I find it very interesting" for better expression.
- Changed "can help us to notice" to "helps us recognize" for smoother readability.
- Changed "prevent us eat more" to "prevents us from overeating" (corrected grammar).
- Fixed spelling of "intersting" → "interesting."
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"And I want to know another body's function to protect us." → "I would love to learn more about other bodily functions that protect us."
- Removed "And" for better sentence flow.
- Changed "another body's function" to "other bodily functions" for grammatical correctness and clarity.
- Changed "I want to know" to "I would love to learn more about" for a more natural tone.
