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My son have been suffering from allergic rhinitis. Since he was a baby he had been took a medicine . Symptoms comes up like this blink of eyes and red eyes,rubbing his nose or runny norse. When I saw the his symptoms then he has to get a prescription before it getting worse. I went through all time from a baby, I could feeling. After he took a pills then it disappeared his bad symptoms.
So always I check to for him. I am so sorry giving him runs in the family.

My son have been suffering from allergic rhinitis. Since he was a baby he had been took a medicine . Symptoms comes up like this blink of eyes and red eyes,rubbing his nose or runny norse. When I saw the his symptoms then he has to get a prescription before it getting worse. I went through all time from a baby, I could feeling. After he took a pills then it disappeared his bad symptoms.
So always I check to for him. I am so sorry giving him runs in the family.

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Here’s the corrected version:


Sentence 1:
Original: My son have been suffering from allergic rhinitis.
Correction: My son has been suffering from allergic rhinitis.
Explanation: "Have" should be "has" because "son" is singular, and "has" matches the singular subject.


Sentence 2:
Original: Since he was a baby he had been took a medicine.
Correction: Since he was a baby, he has been taking medicine.
Explanation: "Had been took" is incorrect. The correct form is "has been taking" (present perfect progressive) because it describes an ongoing action that started in the past and continues to the present.


Sentence 3:
Original: Symptoms comes up like this blink of eyes and red eyes,rubbing his nose or runny norse.
Correction: Symptoms come up like blinking eyes, red eyes, rubbing his nose, or a runny nose.
Explanation:

  • "Comes" should be "come" because "symptoms" is plural.
  • "Blink of eyes" should be "blinking eyes" for grammatical accuracy.
  • "Red eyes, rubbing his nose or runny norse" should be reorganized with proper punctuation and spelling ("norse" → "nose").

Sentence 4:
Original: When I saw the his symptoms then he has to get a prescription before it getting worse.
Correction: When I see his symptoms, he needs to get a prescription before it gets worse.
Explanation:

  • "Saw" should be "see" to match the present situation being described.
  • "The his symptoms" is incorrect; it should just be "his symptoms."
  • "Has to" is fine, but "needs to" sounds clearer.
  • "It getting worse" should be "it gets worse" to fix the tense.

Sentence 5:
Original: I went through all time from a baby, I could feeling.
Correction: I have been through this since he was a baby, so I can feel his pain.
Explanation:

  • "Went through all time" is unclear and needs to be rewritten for sense. "I have been through this" works better.
  • "I could feeling" is incorrect; it should be "I can feel" (present tense).

Sentence 6:
Original: After he took a pills then it disappeared his bad symptoms.
Correction: After he takes pills, his symptoms disappear.
Explanation:

  • "Took a pills" → "takes pills" (present tense and remove "a" because "pills" is plural).
  • "It disappeared his bad symptoms" → "his symptoms disappear" for better clarity and grammar.

Sentence 7:
Original: So always I check to for him.
Correction: So I always check on him.
Explanation:

  • "Always I" should be "I always" for natural word order.
  • "Check to for him" is incorrect. "Check on him" is the correct phrase.

Sentence 8:
Original: I am so sorry giving him runs in the family.
Correction: I feel so sorry that this runs in the family.
Explanation: "Giving him runs in the family" is awkward. The correct phrasing is "that this runs in the family."


Revised Text:

My son has been suffering from allergic rhinitis. Since he was a baby, he has been taking medicine. Symptoms come up like blinking eyes, red eyes, rubbing his nose, or a runny nose. When I see his symptoms, he needs to get a prescription before it gets worse. I have been through this since he was a baby, so I can feel his pain. After he takes pills, his symptoms disappear. So I always check on him. I feel so sorry that this runs in the family.


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