This week I will help with shoveling the snow for my mom, not only this week but all the while in this winter.
This week I will help with shoveling the snow for my mom, not only this week but all the while in this winter.
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Corrected Sentence:
This week, I will help my mom shovel the snow—not just this week, but throughout the winter.
Explanation of Errors:
- Verb Usage ("shoveling the snow"): While "shoveling the snow" is grammatically correct, the simpler and more common phrase is "shovel the snow."
- Phrase Order ("not only this week but all the while in this winter"): The phrase "all the while in this winter" is awkward. It's better to say "throughout the winter," which is more natural and commonly used.
- Punctuation: Added a comma after "this week" to improve readability, and used a dash to separate the two related clauses for better flow.
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필리핀 전화영어 주 2회 10분 24주
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