Lastly, most children think it is parent’s jobs to do chores, but it is not true. as I just said, we should do chores when we make a mess because it is a natural duty. And as a part of family member, we should help each other.
Lastly, most children think it is parent’s jobs to do chores, but it is not true. as I just said, we should do chores when we make a mess because it is a natural duty. And as a part of family member, we should help each other.
Correction:
I strongly believe that kids should help adults with chores, and here’s why.
First of all, children should start doing chores as they grow more independent. For example, if a boy grows up and buys a new house, he will need to clean it by himself. He can’t call his parents every time.
Secondly, it is our responsibility to do chores when we make a mess. For example, if we make the bedroom dirty, we should clean it by ourselves. Isn’t that true? Lastly, many children think that it is the parents' job to do chores, but that is not true. As I just mentioned, we should do chores when we make a mess because it is our natural responsibility. As part of the family, we should help each other.
Changes & Suggestions:
"Help adults do chores" → "Help adults with chores" (more natural phrasing).
"When they become independent" → "As they grow more independent" (sounds a bit smoother).
"He will have to clean the house by himself" → "He will need to clean it by himself" (simpler and more natural).
"He can't call his parents anytime" → "He can’t call his parents every time for help" (more specific and clear).
"It is our duty to do chores when we make a mess" → "It is our responsibility to clean up after ourselves when we make a mess" (responsibility sounds more natural here).
"When we use the bedroom dirty" → "If we make the bedroom dirty" (corrected grammar).
"We should help each other" → "As part of the family, we should help each other" (adds context and smoothness).
You did a great job explaining your points! These changes make your writing sound more natural while keeping your ideas clear. Let me know if you need more help!
