I stared to reduce my work. It's very important to focus on education from 10-11old . My son is 10 years old. He've been studying math and science to the top class. So it is staring harder before. So we have to check more. After I stared to work he was into YouTube and game on cellphone .So I felt need appropriate action to him. After reducing at work I get a peace of mind as well as care for him more. for example give a desert ,control his cellphone,conversation about book or had something.
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HERE ARE THE CORRECTIONS:
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Original: I stared to reduce my work.
Correction: I started to reduce my work.
Explanation: "Stared" means to look fixedly, while "started" means to begin something. -
Original: It's very important to focus on education from 10-11old.
Correction: It's very important to focus on education from ages 10 to 11.
Explanation: Rephrased for clarity and grammatical accuracy. "10-11old" is not standard usage. -
Original: My son is 10 years old.
Correction: My son is 10 years old.
Explanation: This sentence is correct as is. -
Original: He've been studying math and science to the top class.
Correction: He has been studying math and science in the top class.
Explanation: "He've" is incorrect; it should be "he has." Also, "to the top class" is rephrased as "in the top class" for better grammar. -
Original: So it is staring harder before.
Correction: So it is starting to get harder than before.
Explanation: "Staring" was a typo; it should be "starting." Added "to get" for smoother expression and "than" for comparison. -
Original: So we have to check more.
Correction: So we have to monitor more closely.
Explanation: "Check more" is rephrased for clarity to convey the idea of keeping an eye on progress. -
Original: After I stared to work he was into YouTube and game on cellphone.
Correction: After I started working, he got into YouTube and games on his cellphone.
Explanation: "Stared" was corrected to "started." Added "working" for grammatical completeness. "Game" was pluralized to "games." -
Original: So I felt need appropriate action to him.
Correction: So I felt the need to take appropriate action for him.
Explanation: Added "the" before "need" and rephrased "action to him" to "action for him." -
Original: After reducing at work I get a peace of mind as well as care for him more.
Correction: After reducing my workload, I gained peace of mind and could care for him more.
Explanation: Rephrased for grammatical accuracy and smoother flow. "At work" was replaced with "my workload." -
Original: For example give a desert, control his cellphone, conversation about book or had something.
Correction: For example, I give him dessert, control his cellphone use, have conversations about books, or do activities together.
Explanation: Corrected "desert" to "dessert" and rephrased for clarity and parallel structure.
Final Corrected Text
I started to reduce my work. It's very important to focus on education from ages 10 to 11. My son is 10 years old. He has been studying math and science in the top class, so it is starting to get harder than before. We have to monitor more closely. After I started working, he got into YouTube and games on his cellphone, so I felt the need to take appropriate action for him. After reducing my workload, I gained peace of mind and could care for him more. For example, I give him dessert, control his cellphone use, have conversations about books, or do activities together.
