Children should make their own decisions.

I think children should not make decisions. There are 2 main reasons to verify this opinion. My first reason is that children will make decisions that makes them comfortable. This is because of children’s less experiences. For example, if they have to choose whether they will study or eat ice cream they we choose ice cream because that makes them happier. Secondly, Children can feel peer pressure For example, They might buy cigarettes and alcohols because of peer pressure.

I think children should not make decisions. There are 2 main reasons to verify this opinion. My first reason is that children will make decisions that makes them comfortable. This is because of children’s less experiences. For example, if they have to choose whether they will study or eat ice cream they we choose ice cream because that makes them happier. Secondly, Children can feel peer pressure For example, They might buy cigarettes and alcohols because of peer pressure.

 

CORRECTION: 

I think children should not make decisions. There are two main reasons to support this opinion. My first reason is that children will make decisions that make them comfortable. This is because of their lack of experience. For example, if they have to choose between studying or eating ice cream, they would likely choose ice cream because it makes them happier. Secondly, children can feel peer pressure. For example, they might buy cigarettes and alcohol because of peer pressure."

(NOTE: I fixed the grammar issues and made a few small changes for clarity and flow. )