It was my husband's birthday. He didn't celebrate for birthday specially. But I like hold for event that have celebrate for birthday, anniversary of someday and so on. Last Tuesday, all of family done work early than another weeks. So we had held a husband's birthay party. My parents came to my home for a long time . We 've spend a good time. I bought cake my favorite 's bakery sell. Their cake is the best than I 've tried another shop. Even I got married, caring for eachother.
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Here are the corrections:
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Original: It was my husband's birthday.
- Explanation: This sentence is grammatically correct but could be more engaging.
- Corrected: It was my husband's birthday.
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Original: He didn't celebrate for birthday specially.
- Explanation: The preposition "for" is unnecessary, and "specially" should be replaced with "in a special way" to clarify the meaning.
- Corrected: He didn't celebrate his birthday in a special way.
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Original: But I like hold for event that have celebrate for birthday, anniversary of someday and so on.
- Explanation: "Hold" should be the gerund "holding," and the structure is awkward. Replace "for event that have celebrate for" with "holding events to celebrate," and simplify "anniversary of someday."
- Corrected: But I enjoy holding events to celebrate birthdays, anniversaries, and other special occasions.
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Original: Last Tuesday, all of family done work early than another weeks.
- Explanation: "All of family" needs to be "all of my family," "done work" is incorrect (use "finished work"), and "another weeks" should be "other weeks."
- Corrected: Last Tuesday, all of my family finished work earlier than in other weeks.
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Original: So we had held a husband's birthay party.
- Explanation: "Had held" is incorrect here; use "had" or "held." "A husband's" should be "my husband's."
- Corrected: So we had a birthday party for my husband.
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Original: My parents came to my home for a long time.
- Explanation: The phrase "for a long time" implies a lengthy stay, but it seems the intention was to say that they visited after a long time.
- Corrected: My parents visited my home for the first time in a long while.
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Original: We 've spend a good time.
- Explanation: "We 've spend" is incorrect; use "We spent." "A good time" is fine but could be enhanced to "a great time."
- Corrected: We spent a great time together.
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Original: I bought cake my favorite 's bakery sell.
- Explanation: Add an article ("a" or "the") before "cake," and "'s" is unnecessary. Use "sells" instead of "sell" to agree with the subject.
- Corrected: I bought a cake from my favorite bakery.
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Original: Their cake is the best than I 've tried another shop.
- Explanation: "The best than" should be "the best I've tried compared to any other shop."
- Corrected: Their cake is the best I've tried compared to any other shop.
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Original: Even I got married, caring for eachother.
- Explanation: "Even I got married" is incomplete and should be "Even after getting married." "Eachother" should be "each other."
- Corrected: Even after getting married, we continue caring for each other.
Revised Text:
It was my husband's birthday. He didn't celebrate his birthday in a special way. But I enjoy holding events to celebrate birthdays, anniversaries, and other special occasions. Last Tuesday, all of my family finished work earlier than in other weeks. So, we had a birthday party for my husband. My parents visited my home for the first time in a long while. We spent a great time together. I bought a cake from my favorite bakery. Their cake is the best I've tried compared to any other shop. Even after getting married, we continue caring for each other.
