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Since Itaewon accident, there's a party in Halloween.
We had been enjoyed a lot in the past, however we have to check if other people are uncomfortable or not.
We should be careful for having fun with costume.
When I was preparing costume for kids, I didn't need to ask principle of Kindergarten in the past.
I am very sorry to a lot of people who lost their life in Halloween.
I am also uncomfortable for having fun with that.
I hope all of them are taking a rest in heaven.

Since Itaewon accident, there's a party in Halloween.
We had been enjoyed a lot in the past, however we have to check if other people are uncomfortable or not.
We should be careful for having fun with costume.
When I was preparing costume for kids, I didn't need to ask principle of Kindergarten in the past.
I am very sorry to a lot of people who lost their life in Halloween.
I am also uncomfortable for having fun with that.
I hope all of them are taking a rest in heaven.

 

CORRECTION: 

Since the Itaewon accident, there’s a Halloween party this year. We used to enjoy it a lot in the past; however, we need to check if others are uncomfortable. We should be careful when having fun with costumes. When I was preparing costumes for kids, I didn’t need to ask the principal of the kindergarten in the past. I am very sorry for all the people who lost their lives on Halloween. I also feel uncomfortable having fun in light of that. I hope all of them are resting in heaven.

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Hello again, Tina! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I completely understand your feelings about the Halloween party, especially after the Itaewon tragedy. It’s important to be sensitive to everyone’s emotions during this time. Let’s honor those we’ve lost while still finding joy in our traditions. I appreciate your care and thoughtfulness in preparing for the kids. Take care!

 


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