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For supper, we had delicious budaejjigae (korean sausage stew) with the baked beans that I would like to try. The second day, I got a good sleep in bed without feeling hot.

Today was the last day of the trip, so we spent our time going to the valley, looking at fish, and taking pictures. We visited a hole in the wall restaurant that was great for brunch.

For supper, we had delicious budaejjigae (korean sausage stew) with the baked beans that I would like to try. The second day, I got a good sleep in bed without feeling hot.

Today was the last day of the trip, so we spent our time going to the valley, looking at fish, and taking pictures. We visited a hole in the wall restaurant that was great for brunch.
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HERE ARE THE CORRECTIONS:

1. "budaejjigae (korean sausage stew)"

   • Correction: "Korean" should be capitalized because it's the name of a country.
   • Reason: We always capitalize the names of countries, nationalities, or languages.

2. "with the baked beans that I would like to try"

   • Correction: Change to "with baked beans that I wanted to try."
   • Reason: The original sentence sounds like you still want to try the beans, but since the meal already happened, it's better to say "wanted."

3. "The second day, I got a good sleep in bed without feeling hot."

   • Correction: Change to "I slept well in bed without feeling hot."
   • Reason: "Slept well" sounds more natural than "got a good sleep."

4. "going to the valley, looking at fish, and taking pictures"

   • Correction: No change here. This part is already correct.

5. "hole in the wall restaurant"

   • Correction: Add hyphens to make it "hole-in-the-wall restaurant."
   • Reason: When multiple words work together to describe a noun (restaurant), we connect them with hyphens.

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Final Corrected Text:

For supper, we had delicious budaejjigae (Korean sausage stew) with baked beans that I wanted to try. On the second day, I slept well in bed without feeling hot.

Today was the last day of the trip, so we spent our time going to the valley, looking at fish, and taking pictures. We visited a hole-in-the-wall restaurant that was great for brunch.