The pension provided unlimited drinks (iced tea and coffee) and ice cubes, so we drank to our hearts content and had a great time during our stay. I had the most fun when the three of us played in the water, such as climbing on my dad's back while he was swimming and shooting a water gun at my mom. My dad was good at swimming and water fighting, and we couldn't beat him. My dad was good at swimming and water fighting, and we couldn't beat him.
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HERE ARE THE CORRECTIONS:
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"to our hearts content" → This should be "to our heart's content". When we say this, we mean we enjoyed something as much as we wanted. We use the apostrophe ('s) because it’s a possessive form, meaning "content that belongs to our heart."
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"such as climbing" → It’s better to say "by climbing" because we are explaining the way we played in the water. "By" gives a clearer idea of how we did it.
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Repeated sentence → The sentence "My dad was good at swimming and water fighting, and we couldn't beat him" was repeated. We should remove the extra sentence to avoid saying the same thing twice.
Final Corrected Text:
The pension provided unlimited drinks (iced tea and coffee) and ice cubes, so we drank to our heart's content and had a great time during our stay. I had the most fun when the three of us played in the water by climbing on my dad's back while he was swimming and shooting a water gun at my mom. My dad was good at swimming and water fighting, and we couldn't beat him.
