We lived in Busan when my son was 5 to 7 ages. We had neighborhood who hang out with. They came to incheon due to attention their family occasions. We talked before we knew that her Cousin's home is next to apartment from my home. We surprised. But they came to here just family 's gathering. So we almost didn't meet each and they didn't have time to meet us. In addition Incheon is so far between each aras when we move. we had close located. even though in a short time we had a good time.
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HERE ARE THE CORRECTIONS:
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"We lived in Busan when my son was 5 to 7 ages."
Correction: "We lived in Busan when my son was between the ages of 5 and 7."
Explanation: Use "between the ages of" to express a range of ages. "Ages" needs to be plural here, and the article "the" is necessary for natural phrasing. -
"We had neighborhood who hang out with."
Correction: "We had neighbors to hang out with."
Explanation: "Neighborhood" refers to an area or community. Since you mean people, the correct word is "neighbors." "To hang out with" fits better than "who hang out with." -
"They came to incheon due to attention their family occasions."
Correction: "They came to Incheon to attend family events."
Explanation: "Attention" is the wrong word here; "attend" fits the context better. Proper nouns like "Incheon" need capitalization, and "events" is more suitable than "occasions." -
"We talked before we knew that her Cousin's home is next to apartment from my home."
Correction: "We talked and found out that her cousin's home is in the apartment next to mine."
Explanation: "Before we knew" is unclear, so "talked and found out" clarifies the sequence. "Cousin" does not need capitalization, and "in the apartment next to mine" sounds more natural. -
"We surprised."
Correction: "We were surprised."
Explanation: Use "were" to form the correct past tense passive construction. -
"But they came to here just family 's gathering."
Correction: "But they only came here for a family gathering."
Explanation: "Only" fits better in this context, and "a family gathering" is the correct phrase. Avoid unnecessary spaces in possessive forms. -
"So we almost didn't meet each and they didn't have time to meet us."
Correction: "So we almost didn’t meet, and they didn’t have time to meet us."
Explanation: The conjunctions need proper punctuation. "Each" alone is incorrect—just "us" is sufficient. -
"In addition Incheon is so far between each aras when we move."
Correction: "In addition, Incheon is very spread out, making it difficult to get around."
Explanation: "Incheon" should be followed by a comma. "Far between" isn't appropriate for locations; "spread out" makes more sense. -
"We had close located."
Correction: "We lived close to each other."
Explanation: "Close located" is unnatural. "Lived close to each other" fits the context better. -
"Even though in a short time we had a good time."
Correction: "Even though it was brief, we had a good time."
Explanation: The sentence is more natural with "it was brief" rather than "in a short time."
Final Corrected Text:
We lived in Busan when my son was between the ages of 5 and 7. We had neighbors to hang out with. They came to Incheon to attend family events. We talked and found out that her cousin's home is in the apartment next to mine. We were surprised! But they only came here for a family gathering, so we almost didn’t meet, and they didn’t have time to meet us. In addition, Incheon is very spread out, making it difficult to get around. We lived close to each other back then. Even though it was brief, we had a good time.
