I help my son to prepare to go to the kindergarten. Making a breakfast to him, helping to wash his face, teeth, and choose the clothes to put on.
My son gets in the school bus at 8:49 AM.
I come back home, start to wash dishes, clean the room, listening to music or Youtube.
and I have a phone call for English conversation at 9:30.
After then, I make a daily plan to manage my time. It’s difficult to follow the plan perfectly, but it helps me to live better than yesterday.
I get up about 7:00 AM.
I help my son to prepare to go to the kindergarten. Making a breakfast to him, helping to wash his face, teeth, and choose the clothes to put on.
My son gets in the school bus at 8:49 AM.
I come back home, start to wash dishes, clean the room, listening to music or Youtube.
and I have a phone call for English conversation at 9:30.
After then, I make a daily plan to manage my time. It’s difficult to follow the plan perfectly, but it helps me to live better than yesterday.
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HERE ARE THE CORRECTIONS:
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Original: I get up about 7:00 AM.
Correction: I get up around 7:00 AM.
Explanation: "Around" is more natural when talking about approximate times. -
Original: I help my son to prepare to go to the kindergarten.
Correction: I help my son get ready to go to kindergarten.
Explanation: "Get ready" is more commonly used in this context, and "kindergarten" doesn't need "the" because it's a general reference to the institution, not a specific one. -
Original: Making a breakfast to him, helping to wash his face, teeth, and choose the clothes to put on.
Correction: I make him breakfast, help him wash his face and brush his teeth, and help him choose his clothes.
Explanation: Use "make him breakfast" for natural phrasing, and "help him wash" and "brush his teeth" are the more common verbs used. "Choose his clothes" is also simplified for clarity. -
Original: My son gets in the school bus at 8:49 AM.
Correction: My son gets on the school bus at 8:49 AM.
Explanation: "Gets on" is the correct phrasal verb when talking about boarding vehicles. -
Original: I come back home, start to wash dishes, clean the room, listening to music or Youtube.
Correction: I come back home, start washing the dishes, clean the room, and listen to music or watch YouTube.
Explanation: Use the gerund ("start washing") for smoother flow, and "listen to music or watch YouTube" for more natural phrasing. -
Original: and I have a phone call for English conversation at 9:30.
Correction: Then, I have an English conversation phone call at 9:30.
Explanation: Starting with "Then" connects the sentence better, and "English conversation phone call" is clearer and more concise. -
Original: After then, I make a daily plan to manage my time.
Correction: After that, I make a daily plan to manage my time.
Explanation: "After that" is the correct phrase, while "after then" is not standard English. -
Original: It’s difficult to follow the plan perfectly, but it helps me to live better than yesterday.
Correction: It's difficult to follow the plan perfectly, but it helps me live better than I did yesterday.
Explanation: "Helps me live" is smoother without "to," and "than I did yesterday" clarifies the comparison.
Revised Text:
I get up around 7:00 AM. I help my son get ready to go to kindergarten. I make him breakfast, help him wash his face and brush his teeth, and help him choose his clothes. My son gets on the school bus at 8:49 AM. I come back home, start washing the dishes, clean the room, and listen to music or watch YouTube. Then, I have an English conversation phone call at 9:30. After that, I make a daily plan to manage my time. It's difficult to follow the plan perfectly, but it helps me live better than I did yesterday.
