She apologized for being late, and then she told me why she got lost and wandered the streets on an unfamiliar street for over 45 minutes. I hope my mom won’t wander around a street that she doesn’t know ever again. 10/3 We set off on our family trip that we had been eagerly looking forward to. We arrived at our pension, and I was satisfied with the room's as good as I hoped.
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She apologized for being late, and then she told me why she got lost and wandered the streets on an unfamiliar street for over 45 minutes.
- Correction: "She apologized for being late, and then she told me why she got lost and wandered around on an unfamiliar street for over 45 minutes."
- Explanation: We say "wandered around" instead of just "wandered" because it sounds more natural when talking about moving around a place. Also, "on an unfamiliar street" is corrected to mean she was moving around that street.
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I hope my mom won’t wander around a street that she doesn’t know ever again.
- Correction: "I hope my mom won’t wander around a street she doesn’t know ever again."
- Explanation: We can drop "that" because it's not needed. It makes the sentence sound smoother.
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10/3 We set off on our family trip that we had been eagerly looking forward to.
- Correction: "On October 3rd, we set off on our family trip that we had been eagerly looking forward to."
- Explanation: "10/3" should be written out as "October 3rd" to make it clearer when we are talking about the date.
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We arrived at our pension, and I was satisfied with the room's as good as I hoped.
- Correction: "We arrived at our pension, and I was satisfied with the room, which was as good as I had hoped."
- Explanation: The phrase "room's as good as I hoped" needs to be changed to "room, which was as good as I had hoped" to clearly explain that the room met your expectations.
She apologized for being late, and then she told me why she got lost and wandered the streets on an unfamiliar street for over 45 minutes.
- Correction: "She apologized for being late, and then she told me why she got lost and wandered around on an unfamiliar street for over 45 minutes."
- Explanation: We say "wandered around" instead of just "wandered" because it sounds more natural when talking about moving around a place. Also, "on an unfamiliar street" is corrected to mean she was moving around that street.
I hope my mom won’t wander around a street that she doesn’t know ever again.
- Correction: "I hope my mom won’t wander around a street she doesn’t know ever again."
- Explanation: We can drop "that" because it's not needed. It makes the sentence sound smoother.
10/3 We set off on our family trip that we had been eagerly looking forward to.
- Correction: "On October 3rd, we set off on our family trip that we had been eagerly looking forward to."
- Explanation: "10/3" should be written out as "October 3rd" to make it clearer when we are talking about the date.
We arrived at our pension, and I was satisfied with the room's as good as I hoped.
- Correction: "We arrived at our pension, and I was satisfied with the room, which was as good as I had hoped."
- Explanation: The phrase "room's as good as I hoped" needs to be changed to "room, which was as good as I had hoped" to clearly explain that the room met your expectations.
Revised Text:
She apologized for being late, and then she told me why she got lost and wandered around on an unfamiliar street for over 45 minutes. I hope my mom won’t wander around a street she doesn’t know ever again. On October 3rd, we set off on our family trip that we had been eagerly looking forward to. We arrived at our pension, and I was satisfied with the room, which was as good as I had hoped.
