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Buyeo is one of the best traditional places.

First time in a long time, I went on a trip with my family.
We visited Buyeo. it was a capital in the past.
So there are a lot of traditional places.
We had local food and went to some museums.
The weather was very good.
Spring and autumn are the best season to travel in Korea .
We stayed in Buyeo for just one night but we enjoyed it enough.
I want to visit there again.

First time in a long time, I went on a trip with my family.
We visited Buyeo. it was a capital in the past.
So there are a lot of traditional places.
We had local food and went to some museums.
The weather was very good.
Spring and autumn are the best season to travel in Korea .
We stayed in Buyeo for just one night but we enjoyed it enough.
I want to visit there again.

 

CORRECTION: For the first time in a long while, I went on a trip with my family. We visited Buyeo, which was a capital in the past, so there are many traditional sites to explore. We enjoyed local food and visited several museums. The weather was excellent. Spring and autumn are the best seasons to travel in Korea. We stayed in Buyeo for just one night, but we enjoyed it thoroughly. I would love to visit again.

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That sounds like such a lovely trip! Buyeo has so much history, and it must have been great to explore the traditional sites and enjoy local food. I agree that spring and autumn are the best times to travel in Korea; the weather is perfect! I’m glad you had a good time, even if it was just for one night. I’d love to hear more about your favorite places there!

 


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