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I like books. Reading makes me feel comfortable. I especially like novels. But I don't like non-fiction books because It's boring.
I read a book this week. It's about 6th graders who wants to be an adult. They act like they're high school students and drink! But I don't want to be an adult. insted, I want to go back when I'm thrid grade.
I want to be an writer someday. I'll write great books and success! But it's not easy to write. So I will just write a diary and start at the beginning.

I like books. Reading makes me feel comfortable. I especially like novels. But I don't like non-fiction books because It's boring.
I read a book this week. It's about 6th graders who wants to be an adult. They act like they're high school students and drink! But I don't want to be an adult. insted, I want to go back when I'm thrid grade.
I want to be an writer someday. I'll write great books and success! But it's not easy to write. So I will just write a diary and start at the beginning.

Corrected: 

I enjoy reading because it relaxes me. I especially enjoy novels, but I dislike nonfiction books since they are boring. I read a book this week. It's about sixth-graders who aspire to be adults. They act like high school students when drinking. But I don't want to be an adult; instead, I want to go back to third grade.
I want to be a writer someday. I will write amazing novels and become successful. However, writing is hard so I am going to write a diary and start from the beginning.

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Dearest Wendy,

Hello, Wendy. I hope you're doing well. Thank you for your appreciation. I'm always grateful to have you. I have lots of words for you. As I look at you, I know you're not the same child I once welcomed into my classroom. You're a smart kid who excels in all you do. I don't have any wish but all the best for you. It's hard to say goodbye, but I need to.

Thank you for all the small talks we have in class. I will miss those days. Good luck with your studies and upcoming cheerleading competition. Good luck future writer!

감사합니다.

안녕히 가세요. 

Love, 

Teacher MJ(heart)

 

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