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Free school lunches

I think school should give free lunches to the students. All students have their rights to grow well and eat well. So less income students should also be able to eat well and grow well like other students. If government raises the tax because of free school lunches, parents will have to pay a little more tax. if parents pay attention to their children, all students will grow well and eat well.

I think school should give free lunches to the students. All students have their rights to grow well and eat well. So less income students should also be able to eat well and grow well like other students. If government raises the tax because of free school lunches, parents will have to pay a little more tax. if parents pay attention to their children, all students will grow well and eat well.

 

CORRECTION: 

I think schools should give free lunches to students. All students have the right to grow well and eat well. Therefore, students from lower-income families should also be able to eat well and grow just like other students. If the government raises taxes because of free school lunches, parents will have to pay a little more. If parents pay attention to their children, all students will grow well and eat well.

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Providing free lunches in schools is vital for ensuring that every child has access to nutritious meals. It’s important that students from less affluent backgrounds can enjoy the same healthy food as their classmates. While funding this initiative might mean higher taxes for parents, the long-term benefits for our children’s health and education make it worthwhile. A community that cares for its children will see the positive impact on future generations.

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