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Today was go taiwan with Dad Mom and twin brother We are for 5nghts and 6days taiwan travel I 'm was wake up. I'm very tired. I was ride airport bus. I am come in airport.
I'm ride airplan for 2 o'clock. I'm come in taiwan. We at taiwan airport go out. Today is taiwan weather, very hot.
One day, My family went to watch baseball. My twin borther like baseball. I'm don't know play baseball rule. But I'm funny.
We are went eat skewered food. very yummy. We are went lodging. I'm very tired but very happy today.

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Today was go taiwan with Dad Mom and twin brother We are for 5nghts and 6days taiwan travel I 'm was wake up. I'm very tired. I was ride airport bus. I am come in airport.
I'm ride airplan for 2 o'clock. I'm come in taiwan. We at taiwan airport go out. Today is taiwan weather, very hot.
One day, My family went to watch baseball. My twin borther like baseball. I'm don't know play baseball rule. But I'm funny.
We are went eat skewered food. very yummy. We are went lodging. I'm very tired but very happy today.
 
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Today, I went to Taiwan with my Dad, Mom, and twin brother. We will travel for 6 days and 5 nights. When I woke up, I felt exhausted. We took a bus to get to the airport.
Our flight was at 2 o'clock. When we went out of the airport in Taiwan, the weather was very hot.
On the first day, we went to watch baseball. My twin brother likes baseball. I don't know how to play it but it was fun. We also went to eat skewered food and it was delicious.
We went back to our lodging. It was an exhausting day but I'm very happy. 

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