First day I just only play games with my older sister.
My older sister is veeryvery kind and funny and study very well
I envious my sister (study well)
The next day I go to waterpark with my mom.
I play in there 3hours but, I feel it's 1hour.
It's very fun .
I want go there one more .
It is a happy Chuseok!
First, I went car Geoje island with my family. First day I just only play games with my older sister. My older sister is veeryvery kind and funny and study very well. I envious my sister (study well)
The next day I go to waterpark with my mom. I play in there 3hours but, I feel it's 1hour. It's very fun . I want go there one more . It is a happy Chuseok!
CORRECTIONS:
First, I went by car in Geoje island with my family. For the our first day, I just only play games with my older sister. My older sister is very kind, funny, and she studies very well. I envious my sister (study well). The next day, I went to waterpark with my mom. I play there for 3 hours but, it feels like I only play for 1 hour. It was very fun . I want go there one again . It is a happy Chuseok!
