Hello, my name is John. I tell you about my favorite sports golf.
At 1:00, I played golf with my family. My family member are father, mother, younger sister and me,
but my younger sister didn't play golf.
I hit the golf ball well with the driver. Driver is golf kinds of club name.
My younger sister wanted played golf, but my mother said, " It is very dangerous, so you can't play golf.
Luckily, golf helper said, " I help your daughter." I thought my younger sister felt happy at that time.
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Hello, my name is John. I tell you about my favorite sports golf.
At 1:00, I played golf with my family. My family member are father, mother, younger sister and me,
but my younger sister didn't play golf.
I hit the golf ball well with the driver. Driver is golf kinds of club name.
My younger sister wanted played golf, but my mother said, " It is very dangerous, so you can't play golf.
Luckily, golf helper said, " I help your daughter." I thought my younger sister felt happy at that time.
This is the correct way to say this:
Hello, my name is John, and I'd like to tell you about my favorite sport: golf.
At 1:00, I played golf with my family, which includes my father, mother, younger sister, and me. However, my younger sister didn’t play golf that day.
I had a good time hitting the ball with my driver, a type of golf club. My younger sister wanted to join in, but my mother told her it was too dangerous. Fortunately, one of the golf assistants offered to help her. I think she was really happy at that moment.
