Diary

Here's the corrected version of each sentence with explanations:

1. We lived in Hongkong for 3 years.

   • Error: "Hongkong" should be written as "Hong Kong" because it’s two words.
   • Correction: We lived in Hong Kong for 3 years.

2. My son was 1- 3years old.

   • Error: "1- 3years old" needs proper spacing, and it’s better to say "1 to 3 years old."
   • Correction: My son was 1 to 3 years old.

3. We got along playgroups.

   • Error: The phrase "got along playgroups" is incorrect. "Joined playgroups" or "attended playgroups" would be clearer.
   • Correction: We joined some playgroups.

4. He called Jon and mom of them were close to us especially.

   • Error: This sentence is unclear. "He called Jon and mom of them" doesn't make sense. It's better to clarify that Jon and his mom became close to you.
   • Correction: He became especially close to a boy named Jon and his mom.

5. His mom is korean but dad is Canadian.

   • Error: "Korean" should be capitalized, and the sentence needs better structure. It’s more natural to say "but his dad is Canadian."
   • Correction: Jon’s mom is Korean, but his dad is Canadian.

6. So he speaks English only.

   • Error: The sentence structure is a bit awkward. It’s clearer to say "So Jon only speaks English."
   • Correction: So Jon only speaks English.

7. After We left to korea and they left to canada, we was contacting with messages.

   • Error: "We left to" should be "we moved back to," and "was contacting" should be "stayed in contact." Both country names need capitalization.
   • Correction: After we moved back to Korea and they moved to Canada, we stayed in contact through messages.

8. Surprisingly I got a call they came to korea on vacation.

   • Error: The sentence needs better phrasing. "They came to Korea" should be "they were coming to Korea." Also, "Korea" should be capitalized.
   • Correction: Surprisingly, I got a call that they were coming to Korea for vacation.

9. We met for a long time.

   • Error: "For a long time" is unclear. It’s better to say "after a long time."
   • Correction: We met after a long time.

10. My son tried to speaks English to talk with him as he can.

    • Error: "Tried to speaks" should be "tried to speak," and "as he can" should be "as best as he could" for proper tense and grammar.
    • Correction: My son tried to speak English to communicate with Jon as best as he could.

11. They played at the kidscaffee.

    • Error: "Kidscaffee" is misspelled and should be "kids' cafe."
    • Correction: They played at a kids' cafe.

12. We talked story the past.

    • Error: The phrasing is awkward. It’s better to say "We talked about the past" or "We reminisced about the past."
    • Correction: We reminisced about the past.

13. We thought our baby story.

    • Error: This sentence is unclear. It should say "We remembered stories from when our kids were babies."
    • Correction: We remembered stories from when our kids were babies.