lived in therer for 2 year the past. It was Nobody I know. She lived upstair on me in apartment. Afere she kown I have different hometwon she always introduced Busan and kids' impomation. We had interested in exercise and coffee. So after our kids went to nursery then we used to go on maintain neareby beach and go to coffee that has hot place. We are keeping in touch yet. She came here for vacation with kids. It' been a while We had wonderful time.
I met old friend who live in Busan. I
lived in therer for 2 year the past. It was Nobody I know. She lived upstair on me in apartment. Afere she kown I have different hometwon she always introduced Busan and kids' impomation. We had interested in exercise and coffee. So after our kids went to nursery then we used to go on maintain neareby beach and go to coffee that has hot place. We are keeping in touch yet. She came here for vacation with kids. It' been a while We had wonderful time.
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HERE'S THE CORRECTED VERSION:
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Original: I met old friend who live in Busan.
Corrected: I met an old friend who lives in Busan.
Explanation: Added "an" before "old friend" for clarity and corrected "live" to "lives" to match the singular subject. -
Original: I lived in therer for 2 year the past.
Corrected: I lived there for 2 years in the past.
Explanation: Corrected "therer" to "there" and changed "year" to "years" for plural agreement. Added "in" before "the past" for clarity. -
Original: It was Nobody I know.
Corrected: It was nobody I knew.
Explanation: Changed "know" to "knew" to match the past tense context. -
Original: She lived upstair on me in apartment.
Corrected: She lived upstairs from me in an apartment.
Explanation: Changed "upstair on me" to "upstairs from me" for clarity and added "an" before "apartment." -
Original: Afere she kown I have different hometwon she always introduced Busan and kids' impomation.
Corrected: After she knew I was from a different hometown, she always introduced me to Busan and shared information about her kids.
Explanation: Corrected "Afere" to "After," "kown" to "knew," and "hometwon" to "hometown." Added "was from" for clarity and changed "impomation" to "information." -
Original: We had interested in exercise and coffee.
Corrected: We were interested in exercise and coffee.
Explanation: Changed "had" to "were" to use the correct verb for expressing interest. -
Original: So after our kids went to nursery then we used to go on maintain neareby beach and go to coffee that has hot place.
Corrected: So after our kids went to nursery, we used to go to the nearby beach and visit a café that had a nice atmosphere.
Explanation: Changed "maintain" to "go to" and "neareby" to "nearby." Replaced "coffee that has hot place" with "café that had a nice atmosphere" for clarity. -
Original: We are keeping in touch yet.
Corrected: We are still keeping in touch.
Explanation: Replaced "yet" with "still" for proper usage in this context. -
Original: She came here for vacation with kids.
Corrected: She came here on vacation with her kids.
Explanation: Added "on" before "vacation" and "her" before "kids" for clarity. -
Original: It' been a while We had wonderful time.
FINAL VERSION:
Corrected: It’s been a while since we had a wonderful time.
Explanation: Changed "It'" to "It’s," added "since" for clarity, and added "a" before "wonderful time."
I met an old friend who lives in Busan. I lived there for 2 years in the past. It was nobody I knew. She lived upstairs from me in an apartment. After she knew I was from a different hometown, she always introduced me to Busan and shared information about her kids. We were interested in exercise and coffee. So, after our kids went to nursery, we used to go to the nearby beach and visit a café that had a nice atmosphere. We are still keeping in touch. She came here on vacation with her kids. It’s been a while since we had a wonderful time.
