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When I met him first, he kept silent when I asked him something.
I thought that I might be shy person and he looked loney.
I imagined that he began to feed squrrels for spending time with them.
After we met a few times, I changed my thought.
He has been feeding for a long time, even for years, not only for good season also winter season as well.
He is well known as a squrrels feeding man and there are some followers such like me.

When I met him first, he kept silent when I asked him something.
I thought that I might be shy person and he looked loney.
I imagined that he began to feed squrrels for spending time with them.
After we met a few times, I changed my thought.
He has been feeding for a long time, even for years, not only for good season also winter season as well.
He is well known as a squrrels feeding man and there are some followers such like me.

COORECTION:

When I first met him, he stayed silent when I asked him something. I thought he might be a shy person and looked lonely. I imagined that he began feeding the squirrels to spend time with them. After we met a few more times, my opinion changed. He has been feeding them for a long time, even for years, and not only during good weather but also in winter. He is well known as the "squirrel-feeding man," and there are some followers, like me, who admire him.

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REPHRASED:

Initially, when I met him, he was quiet and unresponsive to my questions, which made me think he was shy and possibly lonely. I assumed he started feeding the squirrels to pass the time. However, after seeing him several times, I realized he has been feeding them for years, through all seasons, including winter. He is now known as the "squirrel-feeding man" and has attracted a number of admirers like myself.


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