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I didn't expect that I have bad health condition.
Unfortunately, I found that I have it.
Doctor suggested me not to eat meat soup, and port belly. However I rarely eat them.
In fact, I don't like those kind of food.
I think that the problem which I have now is caused by eating too much bread.
After I visited government medical center, I haven't been eating bread until now.
Ah! I ate once, when I ordered salad, there's a piece of bread was included.
Except that moment, I didn't eat bread.

I didn't expect that I have bad health condition.
Unfortunately, I found that I have it.
Doctor suggested me not to eat meat soup, and port belly. However I rarely eat them.
In fact, I don't like those kind of food.
I think that the problem which I have now is caused by eating too much bread.
After I visited government medical center, I haven't been eating bread until now.
Ah! I ate once, when I ordered salad, there's a piece of bread was included.
Except that moment, I didn't eat bread.

 

CORRECTION:

I didn't expect to have a bad health condition. Unfortunately, I found out that I do. The doctor suggested that I avoid eating meat soup and pork belly, although I rarely eat them. In fact, I don't like those kinds of food. I think the problem I have now is caused by eating too much bread. Since I visited the government medical center, I haven’t been eating bread. Ah! I ate it once when I ordered a salad that included a piece of bread. Except for that moment, I haven't eaten bread.

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Hi Tina,

I’m sorry to hear about your health condition. It’s tough to make dietary changes, but it sounds like you’re doing your best. I hope things improve soon, and you feel better with these adjustments. If you need any support or just want to talk, I’m here for you.

 


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