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Beef stake for dinner

9 in the morning, dad came to the hall to alternate my position. I was rewarded with chocolate balls and a little allowance. I went back home riding subway and bus. I was tired. I burst into tears at the dawn. I think it was because wastes were accumulated inside my brain, which made me hard controlling my feeling. And it consumed my energy a lot. I dived into the bed as soon as I arrived the house. I could fall in sleep within 15 minutes. When mother called my phone, my consciousness came back. I was not in a good condition, but recovered quickly. I went to the library. Soon, mother sent me a message, saying come back home at 8, because we are going to have a beef stake party.
It was a delicious and healthy dinner. Barbequed onions, sweet potatoes and rice cakes were so good. I ate enough amount of thick beef stake and lots of paprika. The lesson I got this dawn is health is important. Eat healthy and exercise regularly!

March 30th 2018 Fri

8:52 PM

It was 9 o'clock in the morning when dad came to the hall to alternate my position. I was rewarded with chocolate balls and a little allowance. I rode a subway and a bus on my way home. I was tired. I burst into tears at the dawn. I think it was because wastes were accumulated inside my brain, which gave me a hard time controlling my feeling. It I consumed my energy a lot. I dived into the bed as soon as I arrived home. I fell asleep within 15 minutes. When my mother gave me a phone call, my consciousness came back. I was feeling bad but hearing my mother's voice, I recovered quickly. Then, I went to the library. and aWhile staying in the library, I received a message from my mother saying, "Go home at 8 because we are going to have a beef stake party".

 

I went home eagerly. It was a delicious and a healthy dinner. Barbequed onions, sweet potatoes, and rice cakes were so good. I ate enough amount of thick beef stake and lots of paprika. 

Today's lesson, I learned is that is health is important and we should eat healthily healthy foods and exercise regularly!

 

March 30th, 2018 Fri

 

8:52 PM


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