The origamy

There was a school talant show!
I do well origamy. so I went talant show with origamy.
I took the pocketmon and pramodel origamy.
When I made The origamy, every one clapped.
I was so happy that audience like it. (audience: student)

There was a school talent show! I am good at origami, so I participated in the talent show with my origami. I made Pokémon and paper model origami. When I finished the origami, everyone clapped. I was so happy that the audience, which consisted of students, liked it.

 

Well done, David! I'm happy you were able to make your origami piece very well that the audience loved it too! I hope I'll see it in  class too. - Teacher Rainbow ^_^