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I finished reading a book today. It was about the common problems in the relationship of parents and their teenagers.

Reading this book, I could see the memories I experienced in the middle school in a different way. I didn't understand students who idolize hostile behaviors. Those students were even seemed to antisocial. The writer said independence from the childhood time often starts when the child becomes the age of 15. They separate themselves from both of former emotional and cognitive patterns. Teenagers experience not only this separation, but also experience lots of changes quickly. It is very normal to struggle because changes happen too quick that makes adjusting to the new situation pretty difficult. In the process, struggling teenagers express their leakage in many ways. They are young, and can't control themselves as good as adults. Their clumsy expression can displease another members of the society.

I leave my family soon. These stories gave some understandings of my age and problems.

I finished reading a book today. It was about the common problems in the relationship of parents and their teenagers.

Reading this the book, I could see made me reminisce the memories I experienced in the middle school in a different way. I didn't understand students who idolize hostile behaviors. Those students were even seemed to be antisocial. The writer said independence from the childhood time often starts when the child becomes the age of 15. They separate themselves from both of former emotional and cognitive patterns. Teenagers experience not only this separation, but also experience lots of changes quickly. It is very normal to struggle because changes happen too quick that makes adjusting to the new situation pretty difficult. In the process, struggling teenagers express their leakage in many ways. They are young, and can't control themselves as good as adults. Their clumsy expression can displease another members of the society.

I will leave my family soon. These stories gave me some understandings of my age and problems.

Good writing!  Keep it up and practice more and more. :) 


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