3/27 영작교정 부탁드려요 ㅎ

1.About three years ago, my boyfriend gave me a massage machine(unit).
I used to commute to Seoul wearing a pair of high heel everyday at that time.
I was touched by his delicate attention.

2.I can't fully understand the meaning of sentence at first.
anyway, I agree. What is essential is invisible to the eye.
But people these days don't tend to look beyound the surface.

3.I thingk giving a present what someone need is a good idea.
But if it doesn't, It would only be a burden.
For that reason, my best friend and I set up rules.
We give a gift-card as a birthday present.
One of my friends bought a luxury bag using saved gift-cards for years.

1.About three years ago, my boyfriend gave me a massage machine(unit).
Because, I was used to commute to Seoul wearing a pair of high heel everyday at that time.
I was touched by his delicate attention.

2.I can't fully understand the meaning of sentence at first.
anyway, I agree. What is essential is invisible to the eye.
But people these days don't tend to look beyond the surface.

3.I think giving a present to someone (need) is a good idea.
But if it doesn't, It would only be a burden.
For that reason, my best friend and I set up a rule.
We give a gift-card as a birthday present.
One of my friends bought a luxury bag using saved gift-cards for years.