Day

Today I went to winter camp,and I played brige game with my friends.After school I went to Korean supermarket,and I bought Korean snacks.After Korean supermarket I came back to my home.I wached Korea chanel Youtube call Utso.it was really fun and happy waching Youtube.After writing this I am going to eat my Korean dinner.I have a feeling that it is going to be tastey.

Today I went to winter camp, and I played a bridge game with my friends. After school, I went to a Korean supermarket and bought some Korean snacks. After the Korean supermarket, I came back home. I watched a Korean YouTube channel called Utso. It was really fun and made me happy watching YouTube. After writing this, I am going to eat my Korean dinner. I have a feeling that it is going to be tasty.

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Notes:

1. Added a comma after "winter camp": To separate the clauses properly.
2. Added "a" before "bridge game": For proper article usage.
3. Corrected "brige" to "bridge": Correct spelling.
4. Added a comma after "school": To separate the clauses properly.
5. Added "some" before "Korean snacks": For clarity and proper article usage.
6. Added "the" before "Korean supermarket": For clarity and proper article usage.
7. Changed "I came back to my home" to "I came back home": For a more natural phrasing.
8. Corrected "wached" to "watched": Correct spelling.
9. Added "a" before "Korean YouTube channel": For proper article usage.
10. Corrected "chanel" to "channel": Correct spelling.
11. Added "made me happy" after "It was really fun and": For clarity in expressing emotions.
12. Corrected "waching" to "watching": Correct spelling.
13. Added a comma after "writing this": To separate the clauses properly.
14. Corrected "tastey" to "tasty": Correct spelling.