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We had brunchtime in the morning. we had honest talk . Sometimes my son and I have argued about sereval something. My son think that mom keeps nagging him and has a lot of interfere.he said that It made him stressed out. I decided never to talk about nags. I thought that not nags, give him advice that it's good well for him. We decided to set rule and plan. I will keep him whatever he doing it after finished his to do list. If he breaks it he couldn't playing game and watching tv for week.

We had brunchtime in the morning. we had honest talk . Sometimes my son and I have argued about sereval something. My son think that mom keeps nagging him and has a lot of interfere.he said that It made him stressed out. I decided never to talk about nags. I thought that not nags, give him advice that it's good well for him. We decided to set rule and plan. I will keep him whatever he doing it after finished his to do list. If he breaks it he couldn't playing game and watching tv for week.

 

Revised Version:

Original: We had brunchtime in the morning.

Correction: We had brunch in the morning.
 

Original: we had honest talk.

Correction: We had an honest talk.
 

Original: Sometimes my son and I have argued about sereval something.

Correction: Sometimes my son and I argue about various things.
 

Original: My son think that mom keeps nagging him and has a lot of interfere.

Correction: My son thinks that I keep nagging him and interfering a lot.
 

Original: he said that It made him stressed out.

Correction: He said that it makes him stressed out.
 

Original: I decided never to talk about nags.

Correction: I decided to stop nagging.
 

Original: I thought that not nags, give him advice that it's good well for him.

Correction: I thought that instead of nagging, I should give him advice that is beneficial for him.
 

Original: We decided to set rule and plan.

Correction: We decided to set some rules and make a plan.
 

Original: I will keep him whatever he doing it after finished his to do list.

Correction: I will let him do whatever he wants after he finishes his to-do list.
 

Original: If he breaks it he couldn't playing game and watching tv for week.

Correction: If he breaks the rules, he won't be able to play games or watch TV for a week.

 

Corrected Version:

We had brunch in the morning. We had an honest talk. Sometimes my son and I argue about various things. My son thinks that I keep nagging him and interfering a lot. He said that it makes him stressed out. I decided to stop nagging. I thought that instead of nagging, I should give him advice that is beneficial for him. We decided to set some rules and make a plan. I will let him do whatever he wants after he finishes his to-do list. If he breaks the rules, he won't be able to play games or watch TV for a week.


 


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