It was great day because i went to winter camp so we played foot ball it was fun
It was a great day because I went to winter camp. We played football, and it was fun.
Notes:
- Added "a" before "great day": For proper article usage.
- Capitalized "I": Pronoun "I" should always be capitalized.
- Added a period after "winter camp": To separate the two main ideas for clarity.
- Changed "foot ball" to "football": Correct spelling.
- Added a comma after "football": To separate the independent clauses properly and improve readability.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 25분 12주
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Integrate Reading & Writing Building 2
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