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1.
Yes, like I said, I've made a calendar for my boyfriend before.
I think it was special but not practical and efficient(just in terms of time).
I prefer to give someone cash or gift card as a birthday present nowadays.

If my memory serves me correctly, I've never been given a handmade birthday gift or card.
I don't know why but I feel sorry suddenly.

2.
I don't want to get any older.
Of course, I enjoy the wisdom that comes with age, but I sometimes want to be free of the responsibilities as an adult such as having busy lives to earn money, living with the consequences of my actions and upbringing of the children and so on.

I first started to feel that way when I became a university student.
That was a time of transition from childhood into adulthood for me.

3.
About two years ago, my boyfriend gave me a book only as a birthday present.
I was looking forward to the present at that time, so It was my most disappinting birthday memory.
However, thinking about it now, I appreciate it.
I don't feel comfortable about having a lot of things the rest of my life to live the minimalist life.

1.
Yes, like I said, I've made a calendar for my boyfriend before.
I think it was special but not practical and efficient(just in terms of time).
I prefer to give someone cash or gift card as a birthday present nowadays.

If my memory serves me correctly, I've never been given a handmade birthday gift or card.
I don't know why but I feel sorry suddenly.

2.
I don't want to get any older.
Of course, I enjoy the wisdom that comes with age, but I sometimes want to be free of the responsibilities as an adult such as having busy lives to earn money, living with the consequences of my actions and upbringing of the children and so on.

I first started to feel that way when I became a university student.
That was a time of transition from childhood into adulthood for me.

3.
About two years ago, my boyfriend gave me a book (only) as a birthday present.
I was looking forward to the present at that time, so It was my most disappointing birthday memory.
However, thinking about it now, I appreciate it.
I don't feel comfortable about having a lot of things for the rest of my life to live the minimalist life.

 

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