My cocernes

I've been having a consider. My son good at math. So he endrolled high mathclass . He likes solve to various questions. But when doing his homework, if he doesn't solve himself easily, he gets annoyed to me. he used to cry, and he gets cross himself. Then I was so frustrating.I used to yelled him "Don't crying." Sometimes I said gently it's ok if you don't do well. I am trying to good way to handling with him. He is very sensitive. So I've been watching YouTube with famous master lectures themed care of son .

I've been having a consider. My son good at math. So he endrolled high mathclass . He likes solve to various questions. But when doing his homework, if he doesn't solve himself easily, he gets annoyed to me. he used to cry, and he gets cross himself. Then I was so frustrating.I used to yelled him "Don't crying." Sometimes I said gently it's ok if you don't do well. I am trying to good way to handling with him. He is very sensitive. So I've been watching YouTube with famous master lectures themed care of son .

Title: Original : My cocernes

         Correction: My Concerns

1. Original: "I've been having a consider."

   • Correction: "I've been thinking."

2. Original: "My son good at math."

   • Correction: "My son is good at math."

3. Original: "So he endrolled high mathclass."

   • Correction: "So he enrolled in a higher-level math class."

4. Original: "He likes solve to various questions."

   • Correction: "He likes solving various questions."

5. Original: "But when doing his homework, if he doesn't solve himself easily, he gets annoyed to me."

   • Correction: "But when doing his homework, if he can't solve it easily by himself, he gets annoyed with me."

6. Original: "he used to cry, and he gets cross himself."

   • Correction: "He often cries and gets angry with himself."

7. Original: "Then I was so frustrating."

   • Correction: "Then I get very frustrated."

8. Original: "I used to yelled him 'Don't crying.'"

   • Correction: "I used to yell at him, 'Don't cry.'

9. Original: "Sometimes I said gently it's ok if you don't do well."

   • Correction: "Sometimes, I gently tell him, 'It's okay if you don't do well."

10. Original: "I am trying to good way to handling with him."

    • Correction: "I am trying to find a good way to handle him."

11. Original: "He is very sensitive."

    • Correction: This sentence is correct as it is.

12. Original: "So I've been watching YouTube with famous master lectures themed care of son."

    • Correction: "So I've been watching YouTube videos with famous master lectures on how to care for my son."

 

Corrected Version:

I've been thinking. My son is good at math. So he enrolled in a higher-level math class. He likes solving various questions. But when doing his homework, if he can't solve it easily by himself, he gets annoyed with me. He often cries and gets angry with himself. Then I get very frustrated. I used to yell at him, "Don't cry." Sometimes, I gently tell him, "It's okay if you don't do well." I am trying to find a good way to handle him. He is very sensitive. So I've been watching YouTube videos with famous master lectures on how to care for my son.