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1.
Umm,Like I said, I don't mind where I shop these days.
I don't think the price is relative to the quality.
However, when I was young, I used to prefer shopping at discout clubs,
Cause I didn't have enough money to buy expensive items.


2.
Actually, I don't remember that much.
I always check the price online before I buy.
That's why I have bought items with reasonable price.

3.
First, I try to make shopping list to not to waste my money.
Second, I try to make my hands free to shop avtively.
If I have a lot of luggage in hand, everything is a bother.

4.
I try to haggle at tourist area only.
Because I don't know about consumer prices there, so I can be ripped off by shop merchant.

5.
I used to wear secondhand clothes when I was young.
However, I feel uncomfortable wearing them these days.
In addition, nowdays, We can buy high quality items without paying higher prices.

1.
Umm,Like I said, I don't mind where I shop these days.
I don't think the price is relative to the quality.
However, when I was young, I (used to) preferred shopping at discout clubs,
Cause, I didn't have enough money to buy expensive items.


2.
Actually, I don't remember that much.
I always check the price online before I buy.
That's why I have bought items with reasonable price.

3.
First, I try to make a shopping list for me not to waste my money.
Second, I try to make my hands free to shop actively.
If I have a lot of luggage in hand, it will be a burden to me.

4.
I try to haggle at tourist area only.
Because I don't know about consumer prices there, so I can be ripped off by shop merchant.

5.
I used to wear secondhand clothes when I was young.
However, I feel uncomfortable wearing them these days.
In addition, nowdays, We can buy high quality items without paying higher prices.

 

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Hi, Sujin! Please check your spelling because your have some misspelled words above.


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