It was great day because i finished my homework fast so i could have my free time.i played fortnite with my friend and than i went to baseball class it was fun because i scored 3 runs after i hit the baseball so it was fun,i went to my house and ate really tasty food it was great day.
It was a great day because I finished my homework quickly, so I could have my free time. I played Fortnite with my friend, and then I went to baseball class. It was fun because I scored three runs after I hit the baseball. Later, I went home and ate some really tasty food. It was a great day.
Notes:
- Added "a" before "great day": For proper article usage.
- Capitalized "I": Pronoun "I" should always be capitalized.
- Changed "fast" to "quickly": "Quickly" is the correct adverb form.
- Added a comma: After "homework quickly" to separate independent clauses.
- Capitalized "Fortnite": Proper noun should be capitalized.
- Changed "than" to "then": "Then" is the correct word for indicating time sequence.
- Changed "3" to "three": Numbers one through nine are typically written out in words.
- Added "Later": To improve sentence transition and flow.
- Added "some" before "really tasty food": For better clarity and sentence flow.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 25분 12주
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Integrate Reading & Writing Building 2
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