Today I did a lot of things.First I studied,and it was so boring.Second I played mobile game,and it was so fun!Third I colored and drawed,and it was fun.
Today I did a lot of things. First, I studied, and it was so boring. Second, I played a mobile game, and it was so much fun! Third, I colored and drew, and it was fun.
Notes:
- Added a space after the period: For proper sentence separation.
- Added a comma after "First": To separate introductory elements from the main clause.
- Added "a" before "mobile game": For proper article usage.
- Changed "mobile game" to "a mobile game": Added the article "a" for clarity.
- Changed "drawed" to "drew": The correct past tense form of "draw."
- Removed unnecessary repetition: "it was fun" after "Third" is sufficient.
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필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 25분 12주
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Integrate Reading & Writing Building 2
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