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People who don't know how to produce rice think paddy field filled with full water is a proper condition for rice to grow.
However, too much water in the paddy field makes rice weak so it can be easily damaged by small typhoon. So, the dry ground is sometimes necessary to proper condition for rice.
There are some times that we need water inside our bowl of life and another times we need to put out water from our bowl of life.
Life isn't just flowing, but is a consecutive process of putting in and putting out.
Today, what are you goin to put in and put out?
Sometimes we need to check the mind scale.
To see does too much enthusiasm turn into greed,
and to see does too much affection turn into obsess,
and to see does too much confidence turn into hubris,
and to see does too much margin turn into laziness,
and to see does too much self-comfort turn into excuse,
and to see does too much sadness turn into depression,
and to see does too much subjectivity turn into self-righteous.
Check your mind scale when you are heavy-hearted.
Mind needs diet like our bodies.
Love is the first thing to do in the world, because our life is only one little breeze passing by instantly.
We came here for a picnic.
We would thank to people around us who are always laughing and crying with us.

People who don't know how to produce rice think paddy field that is filled with full water is a proper condition for the rice to grow.
However, too much water in the paddy field makes rice weak. so It can be easily damaged by small typhoon. So, the dry ground is sometimes necessary to the proper condition for of the rice.
There are some times that we need water inside our bowl of life and another some other times that we need to put out water from our bowl of life.
Life isn't just flowing, but is a consecutive process of putting in and putting out.
Today, what are you goin to put in and put out?
Sometimes we need to check the mind scale.
To see does too much enthusiasm turn into greed,
and to see does too much affection turn into obsess,
and to see does too much confidence turn into hubris,
and to see does too much margin turn into laziness,
and to see does too much self-comfort turn into excuse,
and to see does too much sadness turn into depression,
and to see does too much subjectivity turn into self-righteous.
Check your mind scale when you are heavy-hearted.
Mind needs diet like our bodies.
Love is the first thing to do in the world, because our life is only one little breeze passing by instantly.
We came here for a picnic.
We would thank to people around us who are always laughing and crying with us. Not much to correct! Good job Terry. :)


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