I found a beautiful place last month, so I invited some of my friends to have a tea cookies and cakes.
Even though I paid more money than I used to spent as usual, I am satisfied with the memory with them.
There are a few antique tables and chairs , and they are surrounded with cupboards.
We could see various tea pots and tea cups as well.
The owner of the tea room served us beautiful tea sets with cookies.
I like to get along with my friends.
I found a beautiful place last month, so I invited some of my friends to have a tea cookies and cakes.
Even though I paid more money than I used to spent as usual, I am satisfied with the memory with them.
There are a few antique tables and chairs , and they are surrounded with cupboards.
We could see various tea pots and tea cups as well.
The owner of the tea room served us beautiful tea sets with cookies.
CORRECTION AND SUGGESTION:
I recently discovered a beautiful place, so last month I invited some friends to join me for tea, cookies, and cakes. Even though I ended up spending more money than usual, I'm really happy with the memories we created together.
The place has a few antique tables and chairs surrounded by cupboards displaying various teapots and tea cups. The owner of the tea room served us a beautiful tea set along with cookies.
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Hi Tina,
I read your letter and wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your thoughts. It was heartwarming to hear from you and to catch up on everything going on in your life. Your words brought back some great memories, and I'm grateful to have you in class.
Your writing was clear and well-organized, and your ideas were thoughtful. Keep up the good work in your studies. If you ever want to discuss anything or need help with future assignments, feel free to reach out. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
