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Talent

In my remember, I was good at writing.
When I was in elementary school, I would show my writing style on behalf of my class.
Plus, I received awards at school for poetry and writing.
One day, another homeroom teacher who didn't know me very well came up to me and said she was really impressed with my movie report.
I started joining the film club because I was more interested in video art than in liberal arts, but I kept writing and writing scripts.
It was made into a movie and this experience had a great impact on my life.
I can't write anymore because I have a lot of work to do.
But I still want to get my talent back.
I believe my talent is attributed to my grandfather, who is well-known as a good writer in town.
In the past, it was not easy to read many books because they were written in Chinese characters.
He used to translate them into Korean for the town people and sometimes named babies born in the village.
Sadly, he passed away before I was born, but I used to wonder what name he would give me if he was alive.

In my remember, I was good at writing.
When I was in elementary school, I would show my writing style on behalf of my class.
Plus, I received awards at school for poetry and writing.
One day, another homeroom teacher who didn't know me very well came up to me and said she was really impressed with my movie report.
I started joining the film club because I was more interested in video art than in liberal arts, but I kept writing and writing scripts.
It was made into a movie and this experience had a great impact on my life.
I can't write anymore because I have a lot of work to do.
But I still want to get my talent back.
I believe my talent is attributed to my grandfather, who is well-known as a good writer in town.
In the past, it was not easy to read many books because they were written in Chinese characters.
He used to translate them into Korean for the town people and sometimes named babies born in the village.
Sadly, he passed away before I was born, but I used to wonder what name he would give me if he was alive.


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