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About my phone English today

I did study English by phone.
When I talked with Joe, I heard noises around me. it was cutting the grass by workers. I had to move the space to lounge in building. These days, I try to walk 10,000 steps a day. It starts from wake-up to finish to go to bed. Most of days, I can't complete it, I did it yesterday. I can't afford to concern my menth. After work, I arrive to give the milk to my son. And I play with my son for an hours and I wash my son and feed him milk again. It is about 9:00 pm

I did study English by phone.
When I talked with Joe, I heard noises around me. it was cutting the grass by workers. I had to move the space to lounge in building. These days, I try to walk 10,000 steps a day. It starts from wake-up to finish to go to bed. Most of days, I can't complete it, I did it yesterday. I can't afford to concern my menth. After work, I arrive to give the milk to my son. And I play with my son for an hours and I wash my son and feed him milk again. It is about 9:00 pm

 

Here is the correction:


I had a phone English class.
When I talked with Joe, I heard noises around me. It was the sound of cutting of grass by workers. I had to move to the lounge in the building. These days, I try to walk 10,000 steps a day. It starts from waking-up and finishes when I go to bed. Most of days, I can't complete it but, I did it yesterday. I can't afford to have health concerns. After work, I arrive to give milk to my son. And I play with my son for an hour. After that, I wash my son and feed him milk again. By then, the time is about 9:00 pm.

 

Note: Please don't forget to mention in our class that you have a writing here so I can correct it on time. Take care and have a great time. :)


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