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today i learnd differece of hobby, free-time and interest. i think hobby is doing usually weeken and i well thing. and i think "free-time" is few time of the day. fianally, i think "interest" is just...interest...ummm. for example, i wonder that.
theacher, is this correct???
ah, and i learnd "this is".
this is jeongmin, it means i introduce other people A to other people B.
i usually forgot what i learnd words and centences. i try to study more, you will recieve to achieve!

today i learnd differece of hobby, free-time and interest. i think hobby is doing usually weeken and i well thing. and i think "free-time" is few time of the day. fianally, i think "interest" is just...interest...ummm. for example, i wonder that.
theacher, is this correct???
ah, and i learnd "this is".
this is jeongmin, it means i introduce other people A to other people B.
i usually forgot what i learnd words and centences. i try to study more, you will recieve to achieve!

* Today, I learned the difference between hobbies, free time, and interests. I think hobbies are usually done on weekends and are things I enjoy. Free time is a few moments during the day. Finally, I think "interest" is just... well, interest. For example, I wonder about that. Teacher, is this correct? Ah, and I learned "this is." When I say "this is Jeongmin," it means I'm introducing one person to another. I usually forget the words and sentences I've learned, but I'll try to study more. With effort, I'll achieve success!

 

-> Hello Jeongmin! I hope you're doing fine. Please check the corrected sentences I sent you. Don't forget to take note of the words you find and try to use them in a sentence. Your descriptions to the words are almost good. Let me tell you more about the  word "interest" - when you say interest something that makes you curious and want to learn or the word that you use is " wonder". If you have any questions, feel free to write more, I will find ways to help you understand it.  Certaily! if you study you will achive your goal! :)


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