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today i felt too sorry to my teacher's Chinnee because i was late my class time. i finished to my work on time but i couldn't arrive at my home. so i am pretty surprised. maybe i thought the subway arrived late than on time. so we talked about way for my home on outside. however, my teacher said, it's okay and then she helped me for saying any centens. therfore i felt so appreciate and sorry. i also worried again late at my class beacuse subway sometimes arrived late.

today i felt too sorry to my teacher's Chinnee because i was late my class time. i finished to my work on time but i couldn't arrive at my home. so i am pretty surprised. maybe i thought the subway arrived late than on time. so we talked about way for my home on outside. however, my teacher said, it's okay and then she helped me for saying any centens. therfore i felt so appreciate and sorry. i also worried again late at my class beacuse subway sometimes arrived late.

 

-  Today, I felt really sorry to my teacher, Ms. Chinnee, because I was late for class. I finished my work on time, but unfortunately, I couldn't make it home in time. I was quite surprised; maybe I assumed the subway would arrive later than it did. As we discussed my route home outside, my teacher reassured me, saying, "It's okay," and even helped me with sentence structure. Therefore, I felt both grateful and apologetic. I also worry about being late again because the subway can be late sometimes.

 

-> Hello Jeongmin! :) Thank you for trying your best to make sentences. I appreciate that and keep practicing making sentences so that you will get familiarized with the corrected words and help you express well your ideas. Please don't be sorry, I am happy because you showed up in class even if you're busy or tired you make time to learn English and I appreciate that. Also, about being late, don't worry I understand, I will still wait for you in class, you can also send me a message through my Zoom Email or inform the Korean Managers that you will be late to make you feel at ease and not be worried. Keep going. :)

 


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